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March 31st, 2008

Chapter 1 - Page 21

Just your friendly neighborhood goddamn gunpowder spiderbat. Girl.

18 Responses to “Chapter 1 - Page 21”

  1. Sword Says:

    “ALARM!” - >< Heh, I guess it gets the job done, but it’s hardly the most descriptive of cries for a watchmen to be crying.

  2. SquidDNA Says:

    If you’d prefer “ACHTUNG!” we could go with that, but it means pretty much the same thing. I wasn’t going to push it because I realized I had written the panel as “Guard shouts” and didn’t indicate what he was shouting.

  3. Tory Says:

    You could have had him sing Stairway to Heaven. You could stretch that scene form now until the end of April.

    Does she have to have two guns to swing like that? Indiana Jones always did the whip swing thing, but only went from one spot to another. Every comic character that I can think of that uses a rope or other tether in this manner usually has two (Spiderman with dual webslingers, Daredevil with extensions from his two billy clubs, Black Cat who I think has two grappling hooks that she uses, and even Tarzan technically as he goes from vine to vine). I never read enough DC stuff to know what characters they have that use similar methods of transportation. I’m sure Batman probably rigged something like that at one point; normally he just had the one grappling hook for going from point A to point B with no point C in mind.

  4. Tory Says:

    I’ve decided why he only says “alarm”. The area is guarded by very strong, but not very bright guards. They tried teaching them to give more complicated or detailed alarm messages, but after the three hundreth time of hearing “unknown individual has broken the perimeter” turned into “a cloaked antelope has raked for a meter”, they decided to just go with teaching them to say “alarm”.

  5. SquidDNA Says:

    Batman had, as an option, the amazing power (and imagination) of the late 20th century at his disposal. Tassin, between pages 18 and 21, cannot possibly reload what is essentially a musket. So yeah she has at least two of them, but I expect she using them batman style to swing from point A to B, rather than *vectoring* like Spiderman does.

  6. Tory Says:

    That actually gives a lot of information about what level of technology we should expect out of most of the characters. Just because they have that medieval look to them, it doesn’t mean that the technology is equivalent to historical technology. I mean, they have magic people!

  7. Riess Says:

    I like to think she has one up each sleeve.

  8. Shoe Says:

    The guards are chosen for their thick skulls so they can save money on knock-off helmets

  9. Jaenny Says:

    But hey, hey - he’s bright enough to realize that a fire in a library isn’t a good thing^^

  10. Tory Says:

    But not bright enough to realize a person swinging away from a possible fire that just started is an issue.

  11. Hiro Says:

    he’s plenty bright
    he has a lantern

  12. Jaenny Says:

    Excuse me, but what “an issue”?
    That person might be just by chance practising rope swinging in the vincinity of a possible fire that just started and not have anything to do with it.
    The guard is surely bright enough (Lantern of Brightness +5) to realize that. ;P

  13. SquidDNA Says:

    What I prefer to think (an indeed dictate) happened is that as a guard he was not normally looking for aerial threats and causes for concern. He was patrolling ground level looking for people in distress and ne’er-do-wells. Then he saw something out of the corner of his eye (which happened to be a young woman flying through the air, but he’s not trained to recognize that out of the corner of his eye), and when he looked up, saw something much more identifiable– smoke drifting out of a window.

    Did he actually see Tassin? We’ll get to that. But let’s go with priorities. You know that kitchen drawer full of tools and oddities that don’t really belong anywhere else but you know you’ll regret disposing of? Imagine half of those things are magical, and you have ten thousand of those drawers, and you just saw someone run out of your kitchen which is now on fire.

  14. Tory Says:

    That’s a big kitchen.

    So if half are magical, what are the other half? My vote is shiny. I like shiny.

  15. Jaenny Says:

    Shiny?
    That dragon thing was shiny! :D

  16. Falcon- Says:

    Excellent work on this page Reiss. I love the level of detailing - just right for a comic. The coblestone gestures are a nice touch to give texture, yet the man’s face in the bottom right panel is a very effective simplified shading technique. Keep up the good work guys (not to discredit squid with a interesting storytelling :]).

  17. Dimmay Says:

    I approve of this comic.

  18. Arioch Says:

    Never seen a dialogue bubbled scribbled like that. Imaginitive and unique.

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