Comments on: Chapter 1 - Page 23 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/ of heroes, ancient artifacts and guys with masks Sat, 22 Nov 2008 11:51:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3.3 By: hiro http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-267 hiro Fri, 18 Apr 2008 23:26:33 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-267 well in keeping with the play allegory you can say that the wall of text was a soliloquy :p well
in keeping with the play allegory
you can say that the wall of text
was a soliloquy :p

]]> By: SquidDNA http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-261 SquidDNA Thu, 17 Apr 2008 05:14:31 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-261 Unfortunately it also leads me to put walls of text in the script. Unfortunately it also leads me to put walls of text in the script.

]]> By: Chrome http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-260 Chrome Thu, 17 Apr 2008 03:30:16 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-260 Your archives guy looks a bit like Brent Spiner's dude from Independence Day. Hehehe. Anyways, this is shaping up nicely. Is it me or is Thirteen looking a bit more predatory of late? I rather like your slight revamp of him here. Makes him more of a suspicious character, one to wonder what he's up to as you go along in the story. I also like the use of the whispers instead of thought bubbles. "Like a play" strikes me as a pretty good analogy. Your archives guy looks a bit like Brent Spiner’s dude from Independence Day. Hehehe.

Anyways, this is shaping up nicely. Is it me or is Thirteen looking a bit more predatory of late? I rather like your slight revamp of him here. Makes him more of a suspicious character, one to wonder what he’s up to as you go along in the story.

I also like the use of the whispers instead of thought bubbles. “Like a play” strikes me as a pretty good analogy.

]]> By: hiro http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-257 hiro Wed, 16 Apr 2008 00:27:16 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-257 the "oh my" expression is lol because of the angle of head tilt the “oh my” expression is lol
because of the angle of head tilt

]]> By: Tory http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-256 Tory Tue, 15 Apr 2008 15:08:38 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-256 And the plot thickens. And the plot thickens.

]]> By: SquidDNA http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-255 SquidDNA Tue, 15 Apr 2008 08:04:31 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-255 Which are basically spoken thoughts. Actual thought bubbles would be sort of hokey in my opinion. I suppose this way it's more like a play. Which are basically spoken thoughts. Actual thought bubbles would be sort of hokey in my opinion. I suppose this way it’s more like a play.

]]> By: Riess http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-250 Riess Mon, 14 Apr 2008 16:18:43 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-250 They're whispers. They’re whispers.

]]> By: Someguy http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-249 Someguy Mon, 14 Apr 2008 14:19:43 +0000 http://kirsia.hwcommunity.com/2008/04/14/chapter-1-page-24/#comment-249 Are transparent speech bubbles suppose to be thoughts? Are transparent speech bubbles suppose to be thoughts?

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