Meanwhile, in a similar hallway not too far away..
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April 14th, 2008 at 8:19 am
Are transparent speech bubbles suppose to be thoughts?
April 14th, 2008 at 10:18 am
They’re whispers.
April 15th, 2008 at 2:04 am
Which are basically spoken thoughts. Actual thought bubbles would be sort of hokey in my opinion. I suppose this way it’s more like a play.
April 15th, 2008 at 9:08 am
And the plot thickens.
April 15th, 2008 at 6:27 pm
the “oh my” expression is lol
because of the angle of head tilt
April 16th, 2008 at 9:30 pm
Your archives guy looks a bit like Brent Spiner’s dude from Independence Day. Hehehe.
Anyways, this is shaping up nicely. Is it me or is Thirteen looking a bit more predatory of late? I rather like your slight revamp of him here. Makes him more of a suspicious character, one to wonder what he’s up to as you go along in the story.
I also like the use of the whispers instead of thought bubbles. “Like a play” strikes me as a pretty good analogy.
April 16th, 2008 at 11:14 pm
Unfortunately it also leads me to put walls of text in the script.
April 18th, 2008 at 5:26 pm
well
in keeping with the play allegory
you can say that the wall of text
was a soliloquy :p