Comments on: Chapter 1 - Page 29

By: Tory

Tory — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 17:32:00 +0000

That explains it, I had that wall corner in my head as a panel line and separated panel 5 into two parts! Dang color.

By: Riess

Riess — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 10:19:21 +0000

There’s only 5 panels, 5th is divided into foreground and background by a wall corner.
Can we just say that the last two boxes (excluding the chapter end) belong to 13 and the rest to 27? Does that make sense to everyone?

By: Tory

Tory — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 01:03:07 +0000

Are you sure it isn’t: panel 3- 27, panel 4- 27, panel 5- 13, panel 6- 13? Otherwise, it sounds like 27 is telling 13 that they are looking for a metal dragon when I had the feeling 13 was the one in charge and actually knows the target item.

By: SquidDNA

SquidDNA — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 03:28:50 +0000

Nope. 27 is explaining why he didn’t just let the girl go, why he couldn’t. 13 would rather the plan for 27 to cause a distraction at the appointed time and leave 13 inside the room with the thing they were looking for went off without a hitch.

By: Tory

Tory — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 02:03:25 +0000

Shouldn’t it be all 13 in panels 4-6 except the bottom box of panel 4? Otherwise it sounds like 27 is in charge and knows what they are looking for and not 13. I assumed that in panel 3 (top right), 13 cut off 27 in mid sentence and finished his thought, then took over talking from there except for the question asked by 27 about what they were stealing.

By: SquidDNA

SquidDNA — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 19:24:12 +0000

It’s 27 up until the last panel. However, “The end of Chapter One” is not 13. That would just be weird.

By: Riess

Riess — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 16:48:08 +0000

Yeah, the boxes will receive the color treatment later for easier reading.

By: Tory

Tory — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 14:33:11 +0000

Ah, page 29 does in fact exist. Had to read it a couple of times to figure out which boxes went with which characters.

By: Hiro

Hiro — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 12:42:45 +0000

omg thar si comic!!